Talk:Hu Zhengyan/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: QatarStarsLeague (talk · contribs) 04:42, 4 June 2013 (UTC)

This seems like an excellent, succinct article. Review will proceed in a few days. QatarStarsLeague (talk) 04:42, 4 June 2013 (UTC)
 * Thanks QatarStarsLeague. You'll find that much of the article is sourced to the Ars Orientalis article, which is behind a paywall at JSTOR - if you'd like a copy to check the references, drop me an email and I'll send you the PDF. Yunshui 雲 &zwj; 水  10:04, 4 June 2013 (UTC)
 * That would be unnecessary. As long as this source properly adduces all it says it does, I will trust that is does. I other words, I will take your world for it. QatarStarsLeague (talk) 02:02, 5 June 2013 (UTC)

Lead & Infobox
Both are fine!

Biography
"Hu held minor political office..." What office exactly? Please answer that question in the article if possible.
 * I think I got that from the Ars Orientalis source, but on closer reading it seems to refer to a quote from Wen Ruilin, which is unlikely to be factually accurate in any case; it also doesn't specify the office (just that it was in the Secretariat). Given the unreliable nature of the original source and the fact that the statement doesn't really fit into the flow of the text there anyway, I've amendeed to a slightly expanded sentence about his retirement (sourced to the more reliable Du Jun). Yunshui 雲 &zwj; 水  07:20, 5 June 2013 (UTC)
 * That is the best thing to do. QatarStarsLeague (talk) 13:33, 5 June 2013 (UTC)

Seal carving
Good here.

Ten Bamboo Studio
Excellent here as well.

Works
Superb!

Conclusion
This is a superlative article! I can see an immense effort was consolidated into this article. Once my one little query is addressed, then I will pass this article. Gōngxǐ! Congratulations! QatarStarsLeague (talk) 02:02, 5 June 2013 (UTC)