Talk:Huda Naamani

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Hey Salma, Great job with your article! I see that you have added plenty of hyperlinks throughout since your first draft, which make your article more “sticky”. I noticed that you could also hyperlink “Miriam Cooke” if you wanted to so it shows that Namaani was interviewed by someone who is well established in her field.

I like how you made the Education and Personal life a subheading under biography as opposed to last time where it was its own section. I think that if you wanted to, you could do the same thing for the Later Life and Legacy sections, which seem like they could be brought together since individually they are less substantial than your other sections.

Overall I am extremely impressed with the “Literary Impact” section and how you communicate the intention behind Namaani’s work. This looks like a very solid Wikipedia article so terrific job!