Talk:Hudson Terminal/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 16:48, 8 March 2021 (UTC)

Comments That's it. A typically excellent article, just a few tiny tweaks. On hold, cheers. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!&#33;!&#33;) 16:08, 9 March 2021 (UTC)
 * "Opened in 1908–1909 " seems odd, and you have "Opened	July 19, 1909" in the infobox.
 * The towers and stations opened at different times. I will add a building infobox later.
 * "and demolished in 1972" I would move this to the end of the lead. Oh, it's already there, just delete it from here.
 * ""traveling to and ... which traveled " repetitive.
 * "Third Rail"' -> "Third rail"
 * "assessed at $75,000, and " inflate?
 * "$164,917,431" probably "$165m" would be close enough!
 * "2019[b]).[17]" odd footnote/ref/) juxtaposition...
 * This was because the inflation footnote applies only to the parenthetical, not the rest of the sentence. The reference applies to the whole sentence.
 * "59,221,354 passengers per year" presumably that was in one year, not per year.
 * Yes, that was in one year. Also, it was repetitive for me to say "per year" so I removed it. Epicgenius (talk) 17:08, 9 March 2021 (UTC)
 * "across the Hudson River.[39]" overlinked.
 * "new PATH station " I think that's the first time you mentioned PATH, what is it?
 * Sometimes I forget that people aren't familiar with NYC area transit. Oops. Epicgenius (talk) 17:08, 9 March 2021 (UTC)
 * "H&M trackage.[58][18]' order.
 * ""long[23][68] and could" move those awkward refs to the end of the sentence.
 * "northward[72] to what " similar.
 * "underneath Greenwich Street, which " overlinked.
 * No need to link common terms like "architect".
 * "contractor George A. Fuller.[21][13][61] " order.
 * No need to link "brick".
 * Not sure why but our article on Indiana limestone has Limestone as the title capitalisation.
 * I don't know why that's the case, either. It should really be lowercase. Epicgenius (talk) 17:08, 9 March 2021 (UTC)
 * "4,500 tons of terracotta" short tons? You have converted other such units.
 * Could you link psf? It's something I've not seen used, obviously psi (for my tyres) but not psf.
 * "historians Sarah Landau an" overlinked.
 * ",400 pounds per square foot" you've already used the abbreviation so why go back to the full term?
 * I moved the link and full term to the first usage of psf.
 * Ref 9 and ref 40 have a " -- " which should be an en-dash.
 * "contractor George A. Fuller.[21][13][61] " order.
 * No need to link "brick".
 * Not sure why but our article on Indiana limestone has Limestone as the title capitalisation.
 * I don't know why that's the case, either. It should really be lowercase. Epicgenius (talk) 17:08, 9 March 2021 (UTC)
 * "4,500 tons of terracotta" short tons? You have converted other such units.
 * Could you link psf? It's something I've not seen used, obviously psi (for my tyres) but not psf.
 * "historians Sarah Landau an" overlinked.
 * ",400 pounds per square foot" you've already used the abbreviation so why go back to the full term?
 * I moved the link and full term to the first usage of psf.
 * Ref 9 and ref 40 have a " -- " which should be an en-dash.
 * "historians Sarah Landau an" overlinked.
 * ",400 pounds per square foot" you've already used the abbreviation so why go back to the full term?
 * I moved the link and full term to the first usage of psf.
 * Ref 9 and ref 40 have a " -- " which should be an en-dash.
 * I moved the link and full term to the first usage of psf.
 * Ref 9 and ref 40 have a " -- " which should be an en-dash.
 * Thanks for the review and the kind words. I've addressed all these points now. Epicgenius (talk) 17:08, 9 March 2021 (UTC)