Talk:Hudson Volcano/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Bruxton (talk · contribs) 21:16, 3 February 2024 (UTC)

Review notes

 * I am happy to review this article. I do enjoy articles on Geography. Bruxton (talk) 21:16, 3 February 2024 (UTC)

Lead

 * all of the elements of the lead are repeated and cited in the article.
 * One question regarding years. Some years use this format "7,750 BP" and some in the body use "7750 BP". It is inconsistent with others as well. Wondering if it is a mistake?
 * Aye, it's a mistake, standardized. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 09:16, 4 February 2024 (UTC)

Spelling/other

 * Lead "neighbouring" are we using British English?
 * Geography and geomorphology "Another name is Cerro de los Ventisqueros" perhaps "another name for the volcano"?
 * Geography and geomorphology - "Mount Hudson lies in Andes of southern Chile: Missing "the"?
 * Geography and geomorphology - "Farther south is the 350 kilometres (220 mi) long" "how about "farther south there is a"
 * Geography and geomorphology "From north to south they are the" consider a comma after "south,"
 * I don't think that's needed. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 09:16, 4 February 2024 (UTC)
 * Geography and geomorphology "The Huemules Glacier is the largest glacier of Mount Hudson, being 11 kilometres (6.8 mi) long," instead of "being" consider "at"?
 * I think "being" is fine here. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 09:16, 4 February 2024 (UTC)
 * Geography and geomorphology More British spelling "kilometres" consider placing the British english notice
 * Geography and geomorphology Does "well defined". need a hyphen?
 * Geography and geomorphology "clockwise from north to south" consider a comma "south,"
 * I don't think that's necessary here. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 09:16, 4 February 2024 (UTC)
 * Geography and geomorphology Should river be capitalized in this context? "Huemules river" it occurs twice in the paragraph.
 * Capitalized Huemules River. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 09:16, 4 February 2024 (UTC)
 * Geography and geomorphology "but by 1979 had built back up again" consider "it had built up again"
 * Geology "made up by intrusive rocks" perhaps "made up of"?
 * Geology "except for the AVZ, where the Antarctic Plate subducts instead" is "instead needed?
 * Not sure, so removed it. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 09:16, 4 February 2024 (UTC)
 * Composition and magma plumbing system "Rocks contain only few" Should we add "a" before few?
 * Composition and magma plumbing system "The cone lavas includie MORB" misspelling of "include"
 * Holocene "Pre-caldera outcrops are rate and consist of breccias formed by hyaloclastite" Did you want the word "rate" there?
 * Holocene "northeastern and southern side of the caldera" Should it be "sides"?
 * Holocene "occurred 8010 BC" Should we add "in" 8010?
 * H0 eruption: 17,300-17,440 BP "and like the 1991 AD eruption includes two distinct chemistries" should it be "it included"
 * Impact on Tierra del Fuego "Impact on human populations in Tierra del Fuego" Should we precede the sentence with the word "The"?
 * No, in headers I don't think we need it. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 09:16, 4 February 2024 (UTC)
 * Impact on Tierra del Fuego "Vertebrates were decimated and large mammals wiped out" should be "were" wiped out.
 * I dunno, I think the previous "were" carries this sentence. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 09:16, 4 February 2024 (UTC)
 * Impact on Tierra del Fuego "relied on coastal foodsources" food sources" should be two words
 * H2 eruption: 4200 BP "Unlike the H1 and H3 eruption" should be "eruptions"
 * H3 eruption: 1991 AD "On August 12, a Plinian eruption formed a 800 metres" is there a mistake before 800 meters?
 * No, why? Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 09:16, 4 February 2024 (UTC)
 * H3 eruption: 1991 AD "caldera ice and flowed down the Huemules river" Capitalize "River"
 * H3 eruption: 1991 AD "and people reported problems with breating and eyesight" spelling of "breathing"
 * Intercontinental spread of ash "arriving there in December,[155] ice cores of East Antarctica" should it be "in" ice cores?
 * Intercontinental spread of ash "The 1991 eruption of Hudson took place in the same year with the 1991 eruption of Mount Pinatubo." should it be "Same year as the 1991"?
 * Other historical activity "On the morning of August 12 1971" might follow 1971 with a comma?
 * Other historical activity Other historical activity "Huemules river" capitalize River - occurs twice in the paragraph
 * Hazards "However, as of 2023 the municipal planning of the municipalities on the Chilean side close to the volcano largely ignore volcanic hazards." should it be "ignores"?
 * Done except as commented. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 09:16, 4 February 2024 (UTC)

Images

 * only one image but it is licensed. It is clear and interesting.

Comments

 * , I am sure the article took an enormous amount of time. It is comprehensive and I have not been able to access certain references but I can AGF. You have brought it from this 678 word article to a 4445 word article. You have an impressive body of work. I think we can wrap this up when you have a look at my final concerns. Bruxton (talk) 01:09, 5 February 2024 (UTC)