Talk:Hugh Kennard

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This article looks quite good and is very close to MilHist B-Class, with good structure, detail, referencing, and an infobox. Couple of things, the lead should be longer, at least one decent-sized paragraph that summarises the whole article. Also rule of thumb is that only air officers (Air Commodore and above) have rank included in their name at the start of the lead para. Cheers, Ian Rose (talk) 20:35, 15 March 2011 (UTC)

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