Talk:Hugh of Fauquembergues/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 15:18, 20 February 2018 (UTC)

Will start soon. Iazyges  Consermonor   Opus meum  15:18, 20 February 2018 (UTC)

Criteria
GA Criteria:
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 * 2.d ✅ (0.0% is highest.)
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 * No DAB links ✅
 * No Dead links ✅
 * Images appropriately licensed ✅

Lede

 * Baldwin I of Jerusalem granted him Galilee after its first prince, Tancred, who was Baldwin's opponent, suggest Baldwin I of Jerusalem granted him Galilee after its first prince, Tancred, who was a rival of Baldwin,
 * against Toghtekin, Atabeg of Damascus. suggest against Toghtekin, the Atabeg of Damascus.

Early life

 * but their conflict was soon resolved. suggest but their conflict was soon made unnecesary.

Prince of Galilee

 * However, the battle was not lost, because the king made a surprise attack against the Egyptians and defeated them. suggest However, they were not beaten, because the king made a surprise attack against the Egyptians and defeated them.
 * That is all of my suggestions, passing now. Iazyges   Consermonor   Opus meum  14:34, 21 February 2018 (UTC)
 * , thank you for your review and assessment. Sorry, I do not understand your above remarks. Do you suggest that the article should be modified? Borsoka (talk) 04:39, 22 February 2018 (UTC)
 * No problem. I am suggesting the text that comes first be changed into the text after "suggest". Iazyges   Consermonor   Opus meum  05:47, 22 February 2018 (UTC)