Talk:Humam-i Tabrizi/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Mike Christie (talk · contribs) 21:02, 15 August 2022 (UTC)

I'll review this. Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 21:02, 15 August 2022 (UTC)

Images are appropriately licensed. Sources are reliable.
 * "Shams al-Din Juvayni—who was the minister of Ilkhanate": what does "the minister of Ilkhanate" mean? Does it just mean he was an official in the Ilkhanate government, in which case I'd make it something like "who was a minister of the Ilkhanate government"?  Or does it mean more than that?
 * Hmm.. I'm not sure what to say. Sources also sometimes use the title of grand vizier instead, so it would be the equivalent of that. --HistoryofIran (talk) 00:23, 16 August 2022 (UTC)
 * Maybe just use "grand vizier" instead then? The problem is that "minister" is such a general title readers will be uncertain how to interpret it. Mike Christie (talk - contribs -  library) 00:31, 16 August 2022 (UTC)
 * Gotcha - done. --HistoryofIran (talk) 00:33, 16 August 2022 (UTC)


 * You have a mixture of spellings; "honor" is AmEng; "favour" is BrEng. Which is it meant to be?
 * Hiya Mike. I hope you don't mind me writing inbetween your comment, thought it would make it easier to track whats fixed and whats not. I prefer BrEng, and therefore I have changed honor to honour. --HistoryofIran (talk) 00:01, 16 August 2022 (UTC)


 * "and of his ghazals is also mentioned": looks like a word or two is missing here?
 * Removed it, as it wasn't really that important. --HistoryofIran (talk) 00:20, 16 August 2022 (UTC)

-- Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 22:16, 15 August 2022 (UTC)

Passing. Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 00:41, 16 August 2022 (UTC)
 * Awesome, thank you very much for reviewing this! --HistoryofIran (talk) 01:09, 16 August 2022 (UTC)