Talk:Human musculoskeletal system/GA1

GA Review
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-- Doc James (talk · contribs · email) 05:25, 14 January 2009 (UTC)
 * 1) Does not fulfill WP:lead criteria.
 * 2) Subsection on diseases is much too short and doesn't link to stuff like fractures. Doesn't present diseases in any fixed structure.  Maybe a table would help...
 * 3) Nothing on history and culture
 * 4) Nothing on trauma and doesn't mention orthopedics.
 * 5) Only list two disorders under those that are common... A common section should be combined into the disease section.
 * 6) It states there are 206 bones with no reference. Are there always 206 bones?  What about sesamoid bones and extra bones.  It is not a fixed number.  See List of bones of the human skeleton
 * 7) Sparely referenced. Referencing formatting is also not consistent or adequate.  Doesn't give the ISBN or the edition of the Merck Manuel.