Talk:Human rights in Mexico

Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment
This article is or was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Owlettes.

Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT (talk) 00:00, 17 January 2022 (UTC)

Proposed Expansion
Hi! I am a student at Rice University, and I am planning to expand this article as part of an assignment for my Human Development in Global and Local Communities course. My current plan of revision and expansion is written below.

I would like to revamp the lead and expand it to include a basic introduction to human rights in Mexico, including a definition. It will also include the historical attitudes towards these issues and issues that are of current importance. I would like to update the freedom of press and corruption sections to include information and analysis from newer scholarly sources that cover these particular issues. I would also like to create new sections that focus on female homicides and forced disappearances. These new sections will also draw from scholarly sources for analysis and information on these issues while making sure to link to examples as well.

Proposed sources are on my user page, but any other suggested sources would be much appreciated. I would also greatly appreciate any and all input and advice anyone has to give. --Owlettes (talk) 19:53, 13 February 2018 (UTC)

Initial Contribution Comments
Hey!

First off, I thought you provided a great overview on the issues of freedom of the press with regards to journalists and the government's control over them. I also really liked the perspective you provided about people think that journalists should be loyal, in Mexico. You're off to a great start. A few things I think need improvement would be just to clarify the difference between human rights and civil liberties in Mexico. Otherwise, your article is really easy to understand. Good Job!

Dmazero (talk) 02:49, 6 March 2018 (UTC)Dmazero