Talk:Human trafficking in South Africa

Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment
This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 8 January 2019 and 10 May 2019. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Natsz72.

Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT (talk) 00:01, 17 January 2022 (UTC)

New Revisions!
Hi! I am a college student who is taking on the task of editing and improving this article. Please bear with me as I make changes, as it will be a process over the course of the next couple of months. I plan on including new sections, adding/improving sources, and making the information more cohesive. If one finds trouble with anything I alter, please feel free to message me before deleting any content! Natsz72 (talk) 00:48, 23 February 2019 (UTC)

Peer Review
Overall your article was concise, easy to understand, and informative. You did a great job in gathering and integrating various scholarly sources! I also appreciate the addition of the terminology section in the article. Here are my main suggestions: some sentences seem to reference the continent of Africa as a whole, even though the focus of this article is human trafficking in South Africa. I think the article would benefit from sentences that are clearer about which pieces of information apply to the entire continent, and which sections apply specifically to South Africa. Including sections and subsections that provide specific information about certain populations (children, migrants, women, men, the elderly) and types of human trafficking (forced labor, sex trafficking, child soldiers) would improve the readability, content, and structure of the article. More recent information (from 2010 to now) about domestic and international efforts to prevent and address human trafficking in South Africa would also increase the comprehensiveness of the article. In particular, I think more recent prevention efforts and efforts from international organizations could be included. Aleong809 (talk) 21:18, 9 March 2019 (UTC)