Talk:Humans since 1982

29-JUL-2019
Any rewriting or editing required to ensure neutrality of the article. Thanks.HannahLSP (talk) 17:08, 29 July 2019 (UTC)

COI and how to secondary source
I'm concerned it still has advertising verbiage and should be neutralized, and not use the closely paraphrased wording from their official websites. I've gone ahead and accepted this as it is notable from secondary reliable sources independent of the subject, but those should be emphasized. Instead of referencing the actual museum/exhibition, reference the article in a notable magazine/newspaper that describes the exhibit. Use Dezeen, MB&F, Artnet. AngusWOOF ( bark  •  sniff ) 17:55, 29 July 2019 (UTC)
 * I've corrected punctuation issues and omitted one Vimeo reference which was purely promotional. Another reference is to YouTube, but the video is a CBS This Morning clip which is acceptable. I've changed that cite template to . More than $1/3$ of all the references used in the article are press releases (38.5%). The dates in many of the references are last referenced dates when date of publication would be more helpful. I'm closing the template as answered. Please feel free to open a new request when additional changes are sought.  Regards,  Spintendo  19:21, 29 July 2019 (UTC)
 * Many thanks for your edits and help! HannahLSP (talk) 09:25, 30 July 2019 (UTC)