Talk:Hummock

Oscillating cryogenic earth hummocks
Hi User:Donald Albury I saw your tag on the Oscillating Earth Hummocks paragraph and wanted to get your guidance on this revision. I am still familiarizing myself with policy details. Please provide your feedback and if you think this revision fixes the problem mentioned. Thank you. "Cryogenic hummocks are found covered in vegetation in Taiga and Boreal forests. They are also known as active hummocks due to the freeze and thaw cycle of the ice lenses that continually occur within the organic layers of their mounds. The freezing of ice lenses is what causes the mounds to rise. When the ice lenses thaw during a forest fire, the mounds collapse until they freeze again." --Catdog631 (talk) 02:22, 5 May 2022 (UTC)
 * I think that will work. Also, it gets rid of that puzzling sentence, the trees growing on the sides of these active hummocks tilt once every 25 years confirming continued growth, which is what caused me to look at the source in the first place. - Donald Albury 20:32, 5 May 2022 (UTC)
 * Thank you for your feedback, I have made the revision accordingly. Am I able to remove the tag or is it done from your end? Catdog631 (talk) 00:49, 6 May 2022 (UTC)
 * User:Donald Albury please see above, forgot to ping. Catdog631 (talk) 01:18, 9 May 2022 (UTC)