Talk:Humpty Dumpty/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Thine Antique Pen (talk · contribs) 19:37, 4 July 2012 (UTC)


 * Lede
 * Just a suggestion, there is a reference in the lead. Remove this and summarise it in the article, as the lede is meant to summarise the article.


 * Lyrics and melody
 * Up to GA standard, however converting the quote to cquote can help with presentation. Not required though.


 * Origins
 * I like this section, very detailed. Is referenced well and citations are filled in fully


 * Meaning
 * Detailed and cited well. Quite a big final paragraph, but that's fine!


 * In Through the Looking-Glass
 * Referenced well, good quotes and content.

This section summarises quite a bit of the lede, which is fine! Cited well.
 * Other appearances in fiction and popular culture


 * Notes -> References. However, I will let that fly past me.

Right then, review done. I'll pass this as the article is in good shape, although there are some non-required things I listed above to improve presentation.

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria


 * 1) Is it reasonably well written?
 * A. Prose quality:
 * B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:
 * 1) Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
 * A. References to sources:
 * B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
 * C. No original research:
 * 1) Is it broad in its coverage?
 * A. Major aspects:
 * B. Focused:
 * 1) Is it neutral?
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * Pass or Fail:

Grand job! ⇒ T A  P  19:37, 4 July 2012 (UTC)