Talk:Hungry (The X-Files)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Glimmer721 (talk · contribs) 01:32, 29 March 2012 (UTC)

Will review soon. Glimmer721 talk  01:32, 29 March 2012 (UTC)

Comments:
 * Can the black on the top and bottom of the screenshot be cropped off?
 * "Mixed-to-positive" does not need the hyphens
 * Expand the third paragraph of the lead with more found in the filming section -- such as the absence of the two main actors.
 * Brain and skull -- overlinking
 * Why isn't Steve Kiziak in the guest list? (And why isn't his character mentioned in the plot?)
 * "...because of the stars busy schedules." stars → stars'
 * "As such, the name was changed accordingly." - Best removed, it's kind of redundent.
 * "The episode aired in the United Kingdom and Ireland on Sky1 on April 2, 2000 and episode received 0.68 million viewers." Word missing here.
 * Refs 10 and 11 need published dates
 * This isn't Yahoo News; it's Yahoo Voices, which can be written by any Yahoo user and thus unreliable. (Which also explains why a lot of articles on that site are poorly written...)

Putting on hold for 7 days while issues are addressed. Glimmer721 talk  02:25, 29 March 2012 (UTC)
 * OK, I got most fixed. I'll change the picture ASAP. I replaced the Yahoo article with one from a Cinefantastique magazine.--Gen. Quon (talk) 16:33, 29 March 2012 (UTC)
 * Image has been cropped!--Gen. Quon (talk) 17:16, 29 March 2012 (UTC)