Talk:Huntsman, Savile Row Tailor

Making Improvements
Please can someone point out to me what in the article sounds like an advertisment, so I can correct it? Thanks CrombieDog11 (talk) 14:23, 12 July 2015 (UTC)

Thank you for asking! The following did not sound encyclopedic to me, and if not like advertising then like a gushing business magazine overly influenced by a press agent: "In 1932, Henry Huntsman's sons passed on the firm to Mr. Robert Packer, a legendary figure on Savile Row at the time.[2] Packer was the 'human dynamo' according to former Head Cutter Richard Anderson,[5] who drove the company forward into the twenty-first century, transforming 'Huntsman's reputation from that of merely a reliable gaiter and britches maker to a glamorous bespoke fashion house'." 50.46.103.99 (talk) 04:24, 6 November 2015 (UTC)

I am still working on the page, would appreciate it if anyone could point out whether this now conforms to Wikipedia's objectivity guidelines? Many thanks. CrombieDog11 (talk) 12:35, 19 July 2015 (UTC)

I am still trying to edit the page - any thoughts or feedback would be appreciated from other Wikipedia members CrombieDog11 (talk) 10:07, 9 August 2015 (UTC)