Talk:Hurricane Andres (2009)

Rewrite
Could I rewrite this article? It will be better than this. HurricaneSpin Talk My contributions 00:45, 24 June 2009 (UTC)
 * What needs to be fixed, exactly? – Juliancolton  &#124; Talk 01:10, 24 June 2009 (UTC)
 * Not much, but this rather looks like a timeline, and I am thinking to have a sentence or more for every advisory and expand the impact section. HurricaneSpin Talk My contributions 01:24, 24 June 2009 (UTC)
 * There's no reason to include every discussion for the sake of it; I've already incorporated most of them into the article, and any others would provide nothing more than trivial (and often redundant) details. And you can expand the impact section without completely rewriting it. – Juliancolton  &#124; Talk 01:29, 24 June 2009 (UTC)

Todo

 * Expand Impact section and Meteorological history section
 * Topic sentence need to be longer
 * Change "Mexico" in the storm box to specific places, including states.

HurricaneSpin Talk My contributions 04:52, 25 June 2009 (UTC)

Image
Cropped 250m image would look better. HurricaneSpin Talk My contributions 03:41, 30 June 2009 (UTC)
 * New image avalible on . HurricaneSpin Talk My contributions 06:58, 21 July 2009 (UTC)
 * Good find, added the better of the two images to both articles. Cyclonebiskit (talk) 14:01, 21 July 2009 (UTC)

Protect?
I just saw that this article likes to be tortured (or vandalized). I need a protection request. The vandalizers are mostly IPs. Protect? Jeffrey  Gu  ( contribs ) 02:03, 7 December 2011 (UTC)
 * Padlock-dash2.svg Not done: requests for changes to the page protection level should be made at Requests for page protection. --Jnorton7558 (talk) 02:15, 7 December 2011 (UTC)

Assessment comment
Substituted at 18:30, 29 April 2016 (UTC)

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