Talk:Hurricane Arthur/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Hurricanehink (talk · contribs) 15:43, 7 June 2015 (UTC)

All in all a great read! It should be easy to fix up. ♫ Hurricanehink ( talk ) 15:43, 7 June 2015 (UTC)
 * Any reason you choose "became" and not "was" in the first sentence?
 * "The storm then trekked swiftly northward" - looks more northeast
 * Why no link to US$ in the lead?
 * Where did the initial low form from? A front? A trough? Check the TCR, it has more on origins.
 * How close did Arthur get to Florida?
 * "completed its conversion to an extratropical system at 12:00 UTC as it moved over the Bay of Fundy.[8] The NHC subsequently issued its final advisory on the storm and shifted warning responsibility to the Canadian Hurricane Centre,[27] which reported that Arthur came ashore at Meteghan at 10:30 UTC" - so did Arthur move ashore while tropical according to CHC? Or was it ET there too? Just trying to figure out timing.
 * Why no mention of the 1901 storm whose record Arthur broke? (earliest NC hurricane) (per TCR)
 * The rainfall map shows the heaviest rainfall occurring in South Carolina, but there is no mention of the state
 * Thanks for the review, Hink! I think I got to everything, but could you double check my math on the damage total? Not sure why I got a $10 mil difference now from earlier. Cyclonebiskit (talk) 16:42, 8 June 2015 (UTC)