Talk:Hurricane Beatriz (2011)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Yellow Evan (talk · contribs) 15:11, 16 October 2011 (UTC)

Here are my comments Otherwise, it's good. I am leaving this nomination on hold. YE  Pacific   Hurricane  15:11, 16 October 2011 (UTC)
 * "Originating from an area of disturbed weather on June 19, 2011, several hundred miles south-southeast of Mexico, Beatriz gradually intensified." no need for 2011 IMO.
 * Wikilink Mexico in lead.
 * Lead should be one paragraph due to lack of impact.
 * "However, the overall effects of Beatriz were limited and the rains were largely beneficial in mitigating a severe drought." I'd changed that to "Overall, effects of Beatriz were minor and the rains were largely beneficial in mitigating a severe drought."
 * "Three hours after classification, the depression strengthened Tropical Storm Beatriz, the named storm of the 2011 Pacific hurricane season." Is it more or is a word missing?
 * Why isn't the recon flight mention in the MH?
 * Wikilink Mexico in MH if you wikilink Guatemala/
 * Any damage totals?
 * Why ins't the SNM report used in the article?
 * I think you got the ref and work fields mixed up. Isn't NHC the publisher and NOAA the work?
 * Passing. YE  Pacific   Hurricane  15:53, 16 October 2011 (UTC)