Talk:Hurricane Bob (1979)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Hurricanehink (talk · contribs) 04:57, 10 December 2013 (UTC)


 * You should link to Atlantic hurricane in the opening sentence. And speaking of, what about George in 1950-2? Mike in 1950? Charlie?
 * Linked, and clarified that it was the first after the discontinuation of Phonetic alphabet names.  TheAustinMan (Talk·Works)
 * "and areas further inland " - distance means this should be "farther"
 * Changed.  TheAustinMan (Talk·Works)
 * "and was the third tropical cyclone to form during the annual hurricane season" - the template at the bottom of the article doesn't agree with this
 * Altered to reflect template data.  TheAustinMan (Talk·Works)
 * "and not atypical of a minimal hurricane" - why not just say "and typical of..."?
 * Shortened.  TheAustinMan (Talk·Works)
 * "for the death of one person" --> "for one death"
 * Changed.  TheAustinMan (Talk·Works)
 * Just saying, the July 1959 gulf hurricane does have an article
 * Linked parts to Hurricane Debra (1959).  TheAustinMan (Talk·Works)
 * "These warnings were upgraded to hurricane warnings upon Bob's strengthening to such and intensity" - eh?
 * Changed 'and' to 'an'.  TheAustinMan (Talk·Works)
 * I'm confused in the tornado section where these occurred
 * Added state suffixes.  TheAustinMan (Talk·Works)
 * Any more Indiana impact?
 * Unfortunately, I could not find information on Indiana impact; where there was information there was no explicit connection to Bob.  TheAustinMan (Talk·Works) 23:10, 10 December 2013 (UTC)

Generally good article, just a few comments and such. --♫ Hurricanehink ( talk ) 04:57, 10 December 2013 (UTC)