Talk:Hurricane Bud (2006)/GA1

GA Review
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Once again, this article is well-written and is enjoyable to read. A few things came up, but nothing major:


 * 1) The lead contains a split infinitive: "to rapidly intensify." I would normally correct this to "to intensify rapidly", but I wanted to make sure that it would still use the term correctly.
 * 2) In the the second paragraph of "Meteoroligcal history", a word seems to be missing after "though" in "though was slightly restricted to the east".
 * 3) I can follow most of the article from a non-weatherguy perspective, but I got a little lost in "...which was enveloped within by a complete ring of cold cloud tops. A small cyclone, the wind field contracted somewhat at around the same time."
 * 4) The wikilink to Bud in the "Impact" section doesn't seem helpful, as it links to an article about plant buds.
 * 5) I don't understand the last two sentences of the "Impact" section. Could they be rephrased to make them a little more user-friendly?
 * 6) In the references section, "National Hurricane Center" should be wikilinked on its first use, not its last.

I will place the nomination on hold to give you a chance to address or discuss these concerns. Questions and comments can be left here, as I've got the page on my watchlist. Best wishes, GaryColemanFan (talk) 20:58, 11 October 2008 (UTC)
 * I've fixed points #2 and #4, and changed the first one to what you suggested. Not sure if it takes away from the term; I'll leave it to more of a hurricane guru, feel free to switch back. Thanks,  Jamie ☆ S93  21:34, 11 October 2008 (UTC)
 * I got everything else. Thanks for the help, Jamie. :-) –Juliancolton Tropical Cyclone  21:43, 11 October 2008 (UTC)
 * Thank you both for the quick reply. The article now meets all GA criteria, so I am promoting it. Congratulations! GaryColemanFan (talk) 05:11, 12 October 2008 (UTC)