Talk:Hurricane Carrie/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: 12george1 (talk · contribs) 05:41, 2 March 2013 (UTC)


 * "Hurricane Carrie was the deadliest Atlantic tropical cyclone on record to not make landfall." - Well, since this fact does not appear in the body of the article, there needs to be a citation for it here. Alternatively, you could find a different opening sentence.
 * - Changed opening to its original state.  TheAustinMan (Talk·Works) 15:15, 2 March 2013 (UTC)


 * "across and a minimum pressure of 945 mbar (hPa; 27.91 inHg)." - You should mention that this was the lowest in relation to Carrie.
 * - Added in.  TheAustinMan (Talk·Works) 15:15, 2 March 2013 (UTC)


 * Why did Carrie re-curve sharply to the northeast on September 17? Hint: you can find that answer in The Weather And Circulation Of September 1957.
 * - The article already states "However, as it curved and accelerated eastward in response to a second trough of low pressure..." which is the same thing explained in the Weather and Circulation publication.  TheAustinMan (Talk·Works) 15:15, 2 March 2013 (UTC)


 * "areas from Block Island south to Savannah, Georgia on September 7" - Are Block Island and Savannah in the same state?
 * - Added Rhode Island.  TheAustinMan (Talk·Works) 15:15, 2 March 2013 (UTC)


 * "a slight chance of being affected by the storm,[6] but chances decreased after the hurricane curved northwards" - Is there any way you can cut out one of the chance/chances.
 * - Changed the latter to 'possibilities.'  TheAustinMan (Talk·Works) 15:15, 2 March 2013 (UTC)


 * "forecast to potentially impact Bermuda, schools were closed in preparation for Carrie's impact," - Similar issue here, except the key word this time is "impact".
 * - Removed the latter.  TheAustinMan (Talk·Works) 15:15, 2 March 2013 (UTC)


 * Why no locations for References #1, #2, #17, and #19?
 * - Added Miami, Florida to all. As for #2 it was a template so I edited the template to display the location.  TheAustinMan (Talk·Works) 15:15, 2 March 2013 (UTC)


 * That should be it for now.--12george1 (talk) 05:41, 2 March 2013 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the reivew!  TheAustinMan (Talk·Works) 15:15, 2 March 2013 (UTC)
 * Good job TheAustinMan. I will now pass this article in accordance to the Good Article standards.--12george1 (talk) 15:29, 2 March 2013 (UTC)