Talk:Hurricane Dalilia/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: 12george1 (talk · contribs) 03:22, 26 October 2011 (UTC)


 * "The storm accelerated, headed directly towards the Hawaiian Islands." - This sentence would read better if you put the word "and" between the comma and "headed".
 * "the island chain recived more" - Typo
 * "While tracking near the Hawaiian islands," - Capitalization error; capital "I" on "islands"
 * "northwestern Hawaiian islands" - Same as directly above
 * On reference #2, switch "Case" to "Robert Case"
 * All fixed. Thanks for the review. YE  Pacific   Hurricane  03:30, 26 October 2011 (UTC)
 * Ok then. I will pass this article.--12george1 (talk) 16:31, 26 October 2011 (UTC)