Talk:Hurricane Dolly (1996)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Will211 (talk · contribs) 00:44, 4 July 2016 (UTC)

Hi, will review. Will211 |Chatter  00:44, 4 July 2016 (UTC)

Review

 * In the first caption you may want to clarify whether this is the first or second time Dolly is making landfall, since it made landfall twice.
 * Added the date--12george1 (talk) 03:26, 6 July 2016 (UTC)


 * "Throughout the Yucatán Peninsula, airports and port were closed"-I assume you meant airports and ports?
 * Fixed--12george1 (talk) 03:26, 6 July 2016 (UTC)


 * Under the Texas section, United States should be linked and Texas should probably be linked again.
 * Done--12george1 (talk) 03:26, 6 July 2016 (UTC)


 * Shouldn't Belize and the United States be added under the areas affected column in the infobox, since they had also been affected from the storm?
 * Done--12george1 (talk) 03:26, 6 July 2016 (UTC)


 * And just as a note, the first link in the external links section is dead.
 * Replaced--12george1 (talk) 03:26, 6 July 2016 (UTC)

Pretty well written, with only the minor points above needing fixing. Will place on hold for seven days. Will211 |Chatter  03:14, 6 July 2016 (UTC)
 * I'm finished with fixing these issues. Thanks for the review.--12george1 (talk) 03:27, 6 July 2016 (UTC)
 * Very well, will pass article. Will211  |Chatter  18:52, 6 July 2016 (UTC)