Talk:Hurricane Ethel (1960)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: AJona1992 (talk · contribs) 12:41, 22 June 2012 (UTC)

2 dead links


 * Lead
 * At 0600 UTC on September 15, intensified to its peak as a Category 5 hurricane. - add Ethel so the sentence won't read like a run on.


 * Preparations
 * In Florida, the National Weather Bureau stated that preparations were not being undertaken fast enough nor as extensive as warranted - needs a period at the end


 * Impact
 * A maximum of 7.45 in (189 mm) of rain fell in the state, why the coma and not a period?


 * References
 * FN#1 link St. Petersburg Times
 * FN#2 link Hurricane Research Division and National Hurricane Center
 * FN#3 link United States Weather Bureau
 * FN#7 link Star-Banner

Please fix these issues before passing. Best, Jona yo!  Selena 4 ever  12:41, 22 June 2012 (UTC)
 * Done; btw, there was only one dead link. Thank you for your review!--12george1 (talk) 14:56, 22 June 2012 (UTC)
 * FN#11 is still a dead link. Best, Jona yo!  Selena 4 ever  16:14, 22 June 2012 (UTC)
 * Oops, I thought the link worked. Got it now.--12george1 (talk) 16:41, 22 June 2012 (UTC)
 * Thanks for fixing those. I am happy to pass this article again well done. Best, Jona yo!  Selena 4 ever  16:55, 22 June 2012 (UTC)