Talk:Hurricane Ivo (2007)

Todo
♬♩ Hurricanehink ( talk ) 16:15, 23 June 2008 (UTC)
 * Try for a better opening sentence. If all else fails, just describe the storm - "Ivo was a minimal hurricane that threatened Mexico", or something. However, it is nice having "Hurricane X was...."
 * prompted tropical cyclone advisories to be issued - perhaps re-write to indicate it is a tropical storm watch?
 * There are a few too many UTC's, IMO, and two of them are pretty awkward when read closely.
 * was upgraded to Tropical Storm Ivo by 0000 UTC - saying "by 0000 UTC" implies it was before 0000 UTC, but the best track has it reaching TS status at 0000. Another small point, but there is a difference between when it was named, and when it reached TS status. TC's are named operationally, at a time that is fixated forever. TC's reach TS status often at a different time, since operational advisories and best track data points are not at the same time.
 * and it was downgraded to a tropical storm at about 1800 UTC - this is another little point, as there is a difference between when a tropical storm was downgraded, and when it actually weakened (since the warning centers always estimate the overall intensity, and they only do so in 6 hour increments). Personally, I prefer to say "it weakened to tropical storm status late on September 21".
 * The SH could do with some re-writing and clarification, particularly in the paragraph on its strengthening and weakening. Also, why did it take the path it did?
 * When mentioning Baja California, be sure to specify, since Baja California links to the northern territory of the Baja California peninsula.
 * Santa Fe - fix link to prevent linking to dab

Merge?
The article is mostly just preps. Should it be merged? --♫ Hurricanehink ( talk ) 03:03, 5 November 2013 (UTC)
 * Yes. Nothing really outstanding here. Many storm in 2013 PHS did far more and don't have an article. YE Pacific  Hurricane 03:15, 5 November 2013 (UTC)