Talk:Hurricane Jimena (2009)/GA2

GA Review
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Reviewer:  Sp33dyphil  "Ad astra" 01:30, 6 August 2011 (UTC)


 * "$97.5 million" MXN$ or US$? You need to indicate this for every $ figure from here on in.
 * USD. YE  Pacific   Hurricane
 * "El Imparcial" or "Elimparcial"? Is it a newspaper? If yes, it should be italicised.
 * It is the second one. YE  Pacific   Hurricane  14:37, 13 August 2011 (UTC)
 * "off Mexico's Pacific Coast" Coast shouldn't be italised.
 * It was never italicized. YE  Pacific   Hurricane  14:37, 13 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Sorry, Coast shouldn't be capitalised.  Sp33dyphil  "Ad astra" 23:47, 13 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Fixed. YE  Pacific   Hurricane  02:19, 14 August 2011 (UTC)


 * "Two days after developing" --> "Two days after the start of development"?
 * No need for the start, but otherwise switched it to "development".YE  Pacific   Hurricane  15:00, 13 August 2011 (UTC)
 * "NHC" should come after the first mention of "National Hurricane Center", and thereafter should only be mentioned as "NHC".'
 * ✅. YE  Pacific   Hurricane  14:37, 13 August 2011 (UTC)
 * "becoming a major hurricane" how's a major hurricane different from a "regular" one?
 * A storm winds winds of 111 mph or higher. YE  Pacific   Hurricane  14:37, 13 August 2011 (UTC)
 * "Jimena weakened back to a returned to tropical storm status over land"
 * ✅.YE  Pacific   Hurricane  14:37, 13 August 2011 (UTC)
 * "brownout reduced visibility by 1/4" what's a brownout and 1/4?
 * It is a SW US term, I wikilinked it. 1/4 is 25%.YE  Pacific   Hurricane  14:37, 13 August 2011 (UTC)
 * "Two powerlines also fell down " try "fell up".
 * Changed, but I don't like the new wording. 14:37, 13 August 2011 (UTC)
 * "upgraded in to Category 2"
 * ✅. YE  Pacific   Hurricane  14:37, 13 August 2011 (UTC)
 * "The The United" duplication
 * Epic fail by me.YE  Pacific   Hurricane
 * "180 vulnerable families" what role does vulnerable play?
 * Removed it.YE  Pacific   Hurricane  14:37, 13 August 2011 (UTC)
 * According to Checklinks, there are four dead links.
 * Fixed them. YE  Pacific   Hurricane  14:54, 13 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Still one dead link.  Sp33dyphil  "Ad astra" 23:47, 13 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Fixed. YE  Pacific   Hurricane  02:19, 14 August 2011 (UTC)


 * FN 1 it's either "Pronounce Names" or "Pornouncenames.com"
 * The second one. YE  Pacific   Hurricane  14:37, 13 August 2011 (UTC)
 * FN 5 check formatting.
 * Ugh, I hate this. YE  Pacific   Hurricane  14:54, 13 August 2011 (UTC)
 * standardise date style.
 * On the NCDC links, the date is not known, so I include the year, but fixed the rest.YE  Pacific   Hurricane  14:37, 13 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Issue not fixed – I see both DMY and YMD styles. Plus I don't think "Staff Writer" is really needed for the refs (of course someone has to write it!)  Sp33dyphil  "Ad astra" 10:43, 14 August 2011 (UTC)
 * I think I fixed it (agian), I put "Staff Writer" on there for consistency with other articles. YE  Pacific   Hurricane  16:37, 14 August 2011 (UTC)


 * End note
 * I'm very happy with the article; it meets all evert GA criterion. I hope to see this page at FAC. Until then, have fun!  Sp33dyphil  "Ad astra" 06:17, 17 August 2011 (UTC)