Talk:Hurricane Lidia (1993)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: 12george1 (talk · contribs) 19:41, 24 October 2011 (UTC)


 * "damage totaled to $8 million (1993 USD) was reported." - Why isn't that damage figure on the infobox?
 * Added. YE  Pacific   Hurricane  23:22, 24 October 2011 (UTC)
 * "threaten the Baja California Peninsula[6] At 1200 UTC September 21, Hurricane Lidia" - There is no period at the end of that sentence (before reference #6)
 * Good catch. YE  Pacific   Hurricane  23:22, 24 October 2011 (UTC)
 * "Heading towards mainland Mexico[1] the hurricane weakened" - you should probably add a comma before reference #1
 * Added. YE  Pacific   Hurricane  23:22, 24 October 2011 (UTC)
 * "in which Lida only a mid-level Category 2 hurricane." - Typo
 * It's a grammar problem not a spelling issue. YE  Pacific   Hurricane  23:22, 24 October 2011 (UTC)
 * No, its a typo because Lidia is misspelled.--12george1 (talk) 00:11, 25 October 2011 (UTC)
 * Fixed that. YE  Pacific   Hurricane
 * "was issued for areas below La Pza." - another typo
 * Fixed. YE  Pacific   Hurricane  23:22, 24 October 2011 (UTC)
 * "In addition, one injury were reported." - Grammar error; switch to: "In addition, one injury was reported."
 * Shoot. YE  Pacific   Hurricane  23:22, 24 October 2011 (UTC)
 * In the references, at least add Guiney's first name, which would become John Guiney.
 * ✅. YE  Pacific   Hurricane  23:22, 24 October 2011 (UTC)
 * In reference #2: "Pasch, Robert;" - "Robert Pasch"? You mean "Richard Pasch"?
 * Yeah. YE  Pacific   Hurricane
 * In reference #6, a similar problem occurs; "Lawrence, Max" -> "Lawrence, Miles"
 * Fixed. YE  Pacific   Hurricane  23:22, 24 October 2011 (UTC)
 * In reference #11: "Pash, Richard J." - typo
 * Corrected. YE  Pacific   Hurricane  23:22, 24 October 2011 (UTC)
 * Switch "David Roth" to "Roth, David" in reference #14 to remain consistent with other references.
 * Alright. YE  Pacific   Hurricane