Talk:Hurricane Max (2017)

B-Class review

 * Try to reduce, explain, or wikilink (or some combination thereof) the meteo jargon. No links or context for SSHWS, ridge, tropical wave, vorticity, gyre (you pipe-linked ocean gyre here, but that's entirely different to the sort of gyre you're discussing), convection, eye.
 * Copyedit for clarity and flow, paying special attention to redundancies and dangling modifiers and other things that should have been caught before publishing ("Over 1,500 homes were damaged by [...] damage", "One death [...] declared missing".
 * ✅ Destroyeraa (Alternate account) 00:44, 2 November 2021 (UTC)
 * One stubby paragraph of met. history seems skimpy for a modern NHC system. By the same token, I'd recommend seeking out more sources of impact info. As it stands, you have just two citations that aren't to the US government. –  Juliancolton  &#124; Talk 19:40, 5 May 2018 (UTC)
 * Use el Universal for Spanish sources (it's what I used for MX storms back when I edited in the EPAC). YE Pacific Hurricane  23:55, 5 May 2018 (UTC)
 * Doing. Destroyeraa (Alternate account) 00:44, 2 November 2021 (UTC)