Talk:Hurricane Octave (1989)/GA1

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Hello, I am planning to review your article and it will be reviewed as soon as possible. Bobby122  Contact Me   (C)  18:33, 11 July 2010 (UTC)

Ok, the article is good but you just need to fix a few of those spelling mistakes such as you have Pha in stead of Hpa and a sentence near the end should say that the rainfall was due to the cloud-seeding. Also we need links to the newspaper articles that you cite. when you fix these things I would be happy to pass you article, but for now I will put it on hold. Bobby122  Contact Me   (C)  19:25, 11 July 2010 (UTC)


 * I fixed a few typos, but the one you mention is actually correct. Also, the rain was do to cloud seeding, as its effects took more than a week to show. The newspaper articles were form an offline source, so I can not link them. YE  Tropical   Cyclone   03:30, 12 July 2010 (UTC)
 * Even though you do not have the links to the newspaper sources I will pass this article because of the quotes that came from them which you put. Bobby122   Contact Me   (C)  03:47, 12 July 2010 (UTC)

Reviewer: Bobby122   Contact Me   (C)  19:25, 11 July 2010 (UTC) July July 2010 (UTC)