Talk:Hurricane Paine (1986)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: YE  Tropical   Cyclone  19:31, 16 October 2010 (UTC)

Nice article, Hink. Here are a few comments
 * "Hurricane Paine in 1986 contributed to one of the most significant flooding events in Oklahoma history" no need for 1986
 * "By that time, Paine had attained peak winds of 100 mph (155 km/h), and it weakened slightly before hitting the Mexican state of Sonora." it should be replaced with but.
 * Any preparations from Roslyn?

Ill have more later, that is it for now. YE  Tropical   Cyclone  19:31, 16 October 2010 (UTC)


 * Thanks for the review. I thought it'd be good to establish the year as soon as possible. Normally that happens in the first sentence. Do you still think I should remove it? Good call about "and --> but", and no, I couldn't find much of anything in Mexico on Paine. That's where the typical hurricane preparations would've been (evacs, whatnot). Likewise, I couldn't find good preps for inland US. Hurricanehink ( talk ) 19:38, 16 October 2010 (UTC)

Good. Here are some more comments.

metric units? metric units? year? I reckon there is a word missing *what about the adding the Costliest Pacific hurricanes to the article?
 * with winds of 90 mph
 * over an area of 82.9°F
 * The flooding event caused $350 million in damage,
 * half of which to agriculture
 * wait for renaming the article because we do not have a WP:TROP consensus (I plan to write an article for the other Paine soem day). YE  Tropical   Cyclone

That's it for this round. As a recommendation, when this article passes replace it with one. YE  Tropical   Cyclone  22:25, 16 October 2010 (UTC)
 * Alright, I addressed all of that. Hurricanehink ( talk ) 23:16, 16 October 2010 (UTC)
 * I bolded the stuff you did not do. I am sorry if I confused you. YE  Tropical   Cyclone  23:37, 16 October 2010 (UTC)
 * Actually, there is no specific damage total for Paine, only for the larger rainfall event, so I opted not to include that template. Hurricanehink ( talk ) 00:56, 17 October 2010 (UTC)
 * Great job. Ill read it once more to see if there is no more issues. If not, then you have another GA. YE  Tropical   Cyclone  14:21, 17 October 2010 (UTC)

Last, but not least which storm? Newton? Roslyn? YE  Tropical   Cyclone  14:26, 17 October 2010 (UTC)
 * one of two cyclones in the basin that warranted aircraft data
 * Gotcha, it was Newton. Hurricanehink ( talk ) 15:46, 17 October 2010 (UTC)
 * Time to pass. I apologize for not making this GAN one day (homework and writing articles is more important than this). YE  Tropical   Cyclone  16:17, 17 October 2010 (UTC)
 * No prob, thanks for the review! Hurricanehink ( talk ) 16:22, 17 October 2010 (UTC)