Talk:Hurricane Paula/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Hurricanehink (talk · contribs) 04:17, 6 December 2013 (UTC)


 * "from an low pressure area " - were you going for something else here?
 * That was originally "area of low pressure", hence the "an".--12george1 (talk) 05:02, 6 December 2013 (UTC)


 * "with the storm peaking with" - avoid too many "with"s
 * "With the grain", right? :P --12george1 (talk) 05:02, 6 December 2013 (UTC)


 * "After convection appeared to increase again" - why "appeared"?
 * Well, that word just disappeared :P --12george1 (talk) 05:02, 6 December 2013 (UTC)


 * Link SSHS somewhere
 * Done--12george1 (talk) 05:02, 6 December 2013 (UTC)


 * "The National Hurricane Center noted that wind shear would increase during "the next day or so", which would "only allow small strengthening"" - why is this important?
 * Removed--12george1 (talk) 05:02, 6 December 2013 (UTC)


 * "Hurricane-force winds extended only 25 miles (40 km) from the center of Paula, while tropical storm-force winds extended 70 miles (110 km) from the same point" - wouldn't this be more useful at the peak?
 * Not sure if it was actually at the peak, but I will move it there.--12george1 (talk) 05:02, 6 December 2013 (UTC)


 * You mention Nicaragua impact in the infobox, but don't say any. Why? Did you check WMO?
 * I did check WMO, but found nothing. I searched elsewhere and all I found was heavy rainfall.--12george1 (talk) 05:02, 6 December 2013 (UTC)


 * Puerto Lempira Airport - link?
 * That airport does not have an article--12george1 (talk) 05:02, 6 December 2013 (UTC)


 * "locals in the region stated that the winds were stronger than those produced by Hurricane Mitch in 1998" - specifying the region would be helpful here, since Mitch affected the whole country
 * La Mosquitia--12george1 (talk) 05:02, 6 December 2013 (UTC)


 * "waves up to 7 ft (2.1 m) pounded beaches, leading to fears of additional flooding" - did they actually cause flooding though?
 * No--12george1 (talk) 05:02, 6 December 2013 (UTC)


 * "most of which were in Cancún" - when you refer to people, use "whom", not "which"
 * Fixed--12george1 (talk) 05:02, 6 December 2013 (UTC)


 * - waterspouts in the Florida Keys
 * Added--12george1 (talk) 05:02, 6 December 2013 (UTC)

All in all, good job! --♫ Hurricanehink ( talk ) 04:17, 6 December 2013 (UTC)