Talk:Hurricane Pauline (1968)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Wizardman (talk · contribs) 02:41, 28 October 2011 (UTC)

Here are the issues I found:
 * "near Ciudad Constitución, in Mexico" that comma's not needed.
 * "Even though, the picture" same, no comma needed.
 * "October 1 was mostly not helpful due to another electronic problem, however," a semicolon after problem works better here.

Just a few punctuation things. Article's on hold and will be passed when done. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 02:41, 28 October 2011 (UTC)
 * All fixed. Thanks for the review. YE  Pacific   Hurricane  02:58, 28 October 2011 (UTC)
 * Looks good now, so I'll pass the article. Wizardman  Operation Big Bear 04:53, 28 October 2011 (UTC)