Talk:Hurricane Rosa (1994)/GA1

GA Review
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Hi! I will be reviewing this article for GAN, and I should have the full review up soon. Dana boomer (talk) 20:21, 23 October 2008 (UTC)


 * GA review (see here for criteria)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS):
 * The lead should be expanded a bit with a couple of sentences about the meteorological history of the storm.
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (references): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Pass/Fail:

The only issue that I have with the article is that I would like to see the lead expanded, so I am putting the article on hold to allow you time to address this. Other than that, this is a very nice article. Drop me a note if you have any questions. Dana boomer (talk) 20:33, 23 October 2008 (UTC)
 * I added some meteorological history to the lead. Miss Madeline | Talk to Madeline 00:15, 24 October 2008 (UTC)
 * Everything looks good, so I'm passing the article. Nice work! Dana boomer (talk) 11:59, 24 October 2008 (UTC)