Talk:Hurricane Roslyn (1986)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Leave Message, Yellow Evan home 19:43, 8 May 2010 (UTC) In all great article. However, I have some comments.
 * Lead


 * Should be a little longer, mention when it became a tropical storm and hurricane.
 * MH


 * "With warm waters and increasing cyclonic organization, it developed into Tropical Depression 24 on October 15 offshore Guatemala." Spell out 24.
 * "By 48 hours after attaining hurricane status, Roslyn reached peak winds of 145 mph (230 km/h), about 550 miles (890 km) southwest of Manzanillo, Colima;"Reword the first part of the sentence
 * "After bypassing southeast of the Baja California Peninsula, Hurricane Roslyn moved ashore on October 22 at Mazatlán, Sinaloa with winds of 75 mph (120 km/h)."Ashore should be onshore
 * Impact


 * Rename section, as you did Easy 50.
 * "Storm impact was limited to flooded homes and factories, as well as some crop damage and beach erosion."Remove the storm part.
 * I am placing the article on hold for now.

Leave Message, Yellow Evan home


 * Thanks, did everything but "ashore" vs. "onshore" (I think both are correct, but I prefer the former). --Hurricanehink ( talk ) 20:40, 8 May 2010 (UTC)\
 * Ok, I am passing this article. Leave Message, Yellow Evan home