Talk:Hurts 2B Human/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: MarioSoulTruthFan (talk · contribs) 15:52, 27 April 2020 (UTC)

Infobox

 * Needs alt

Lead

 * to commercial success → be more specific
 * At least one/two certifications of the album?
 * as the second, third and fourth singles, respectively. → see below on "Release and promotion" section as I have some doubts

Background

 * which began in March 2018 → when it ended?

Writing and collaborations

 * RE-TITLE the section to "Development and composition"

Title and artwork

 * This should be incorporated in the background section

Music and lyrical interpretation

 * The caption of the picture doesn't nothing at all → remove it
 * Malvika Padin of Clash labelled it "a collection of anthemic pop tracks threaded through with her bold vocals". → Critical Reception
 * Written by Pink, Jorgen Odegard, and Dan Reynolds, → remove
 * Remove the writers/procuders from all the sentences they don't add anything to this section
 * Wrabel appears on the next song → how he appears? as a songwriter? featured guest?
 * The sixth song, and the title track, appears next, and features Khalid. → The title track, which appears next, features Khalid and...
 * The seventh track and the second single, "Can We Pretend", → need to mention the featured guest
 * in collaboration with Chris Stapleton → he is a feature guest

Release and promotion

 * No awards or nominations for "Walk Me Home"?
 * The following month, it was released as a radio single in Australia → it sounds like it was only released in Austrlia
 * "On April 11, "Can We Pretend" was released as the second promotional single.[56] The following month, it was released as a radio single in Australia" → "Can We Pretend" was first released as the second promotional single, on April 11.[56] On the following month, it was released as the second official single
 * "Hurts 2B Human" was released to radio in selected territories → "Hurts 2B Human" was released in selected territories. (Stop calling them radio singles)
 * "Love Me Anyway" was further serviced to country and adult contemporary radio on September 17 as the fourth and final single from Hurts 2B Human → "Love Me Anyway" was serviced to country and adult contemporary radio in the United States on September 17 as the final single from Hurts 2B Human.

Critical reception

 * Add AnyDencetMusic, is simmlar to Metacritic in its use. 1
 * and felt → and believed
 * Giving it a rating of "B", Maura Johnston of Entertainment Weekly commented → Maura Johnston of Entertainment Weekly, who gave the album a "B" rating, commented
 * While reviewing the album along with Lizzo's Cuz I Love You (2019) → remove, irrelevant to the topic
 * comparing the latter with her second studio album → regarding what?
 * Beautiful Trauma → release year?
 * and calling Hurts → and called Hurts
 * In a mixed review for Slant Magazine → In a negative review for Slant Magazine (she gave the album 2,5 out of five starts, its below average)

Commercial performance

 * ranked number two on the Top Album Sales chart with pure album sales of 95,000 copies (83% of overall units) → with pure album sales of 95,000 copies
 * The release also saw Pink rise from number seventeen to number one on the Billboard Artist 100 chart, which measures artist activity across the publication's most influential charts → remove it, this chart has a different metolodogy and even includes wiki searches
 * Silver, Gold → silver, gold
 * Update the ARIA certification since now is platinum

Track listing

 * Total length with the bonus track?

Personnel

 * This section is very confusing
 * This how you should do it (Pink - lead vocals, background vocals, executive production, production). So you cite the name and everyhting the person did
 * New name for the first and second subsection "Technical and composing credits^"
 * Use

Charts

 * Fine

Certifications

 * Australia: Use the automatic reference from 2019.

Release history

 * Fine

Overall

 * You can now addrss the changes. You have seven days for it. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 15:18, 30 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Hi! Thank you very much for the review, I think I covered every suggestion. Please let me know if there's anything else I can do. Greets; Gabrielflorin01 (talk) 21:11, 30 April 2020 (UTC)
 * there is one source with more than one publisher, you need to remove the one that is wrong. Who mixed the rest of the album and by the way who mastered the album?
 * From what I'm seeing from the album credits, it looks like the entire album was mixed by Serban Ghenea and engineered by John Hanes. Simon Gooding mixed "Walk Me Home", "90 Days", and "Love Me Anyway", Cash Cash mixed "Can We Pretend", and "The Last Song of Your Life" was mixed by billymann. The album was mastered by Dave Kutch at The Mastering Place, NYC. By the way, should I also add a subsection management and legal representation?; Gabrielflorin01 (talk) 05:45, 1 May 2020 (UTC)
 * Add the mixing and the mastering missing, as well as the management and legal representation. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 12:19, 1 May 2020 (UTC)