Talk:Hussein, Crown Prince of Jordan/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 08:10, 6 March 2018 (UTC)

Will start soon. Iazyges  Consermonor   Opus meum  08:10, 6 March 2018 (UTC)

Criteria
GA Criteria:
 * 1
 * 1.a ✅
 * 1.b ✅
 * 2
 * 2.a ✅
 * 2.b ✅
 * 2.c ✅
 * 2.d ✅ (13.8% is highest)
 * 3
 * 3.a ✅
 * 3.b ✅
 * 4
 * 4.a ✅
 * 5
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 * 6
 * 6.a ✅
 * 6.b ✅
 * No DAB links ✅
 * No Dead links ✅

Prose Suggestions

 * According to Hussein, he is a 42nd-generation direct descendant of Muhammad as he belongs to the Hashemite family, who have ruled Jordan since 1921. suggest you change this Hussein is a 42nd-generation direct descendant of Muhammad, as he belongs to the Hashemite family, who have ruled Jordan since 1921. (I believe the descent is widely accepted fact)

Early life and Education

 * Hussein says he is the 42nd direct descendant of Muhammad through his daughter suggest Hussein is the 42nd direct descendant of Muhammad through his daughter
 * are the second-oldest-ruling dynasty in the world after the Imperial House of Japan. suggest and are the second-oldest ruling dynasty in the world, after the Imperial House of Japan.
 * That is all of my suggestions, passing now. Iazyges   Consermonor   Opus meum  16:35, 9 March 2018 (UTC)