Talk:Hussein Saeed/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 18:25, 24 November 2016 (UTC)

Hi, I will be reviewing this against the GA criteria as part of a GAN sweep. I'll leave some comments soon. JAG UAR   18:25, 24 November 2016 (UTC)

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Checking against the GA criteria

 * GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose, no copyvios, spelling and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * The first paragraph of the early life section needs a citation
 * "Since then, Iraq was not able to qualify to the World Cup" - this too needs a source
 * " Saeed played all the 630 minutes of Iraq's 7 matches" - missing full stop
 * " One of the documents even showed him and Al-Badri executing a mission" - remove 'even', sounds informal
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * No original research found.
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Pass/Fail:

Just a few minor issues to address, but other than this the article is looking great. On hold  JAG  UAR   18:30, 24 November 2016 (UTC)


 * The issues pointed out in the (It is reasonably written well) section are now solved. Hashima20 (talk) 19:28, 24 November 2016 (UTC)
 * Thanks, this looks ready to be promoted now.  JAG  UAR   19:32, 24 November 2016 (UTC)
 * Really appreciate it! Hashima20 (talk) 19:34, 24 November 2016 (UTC)