Talk:Hwa Nan College

Alisheem (talk) 13:13, 7 July 2023 (UTC)

Review of the article
Hi @Hui Lin 22,

thanks for your valuable contribution to the Wikipedia project! I've read the page you expanded and I discovered an interesting new story.

I only have few suggestions for format improvement:


 * please avoid using bold and italic outside the opening section of the Wiki page
 * in my opinion, the History and Campus sections would benefit from some additional references and citations of valuable sources. Please consider expanding them

Hope you are enjoy your adventure in the world of collaborative projects ;)

Best,

--FedericaGaspari (talk) 13:36, 7 July 2023 (UTC)


 * Thank you for your reading and advice, hope you enjoy it. I'll expand on some once I find other sources. Hui Lin 22 (talk) 15:57, 10 July 2023 (UTC)

Observations and suggestions for improvements
The following observations and suggestions for improvements were collected, following an expert review of the article within the Science, Technology, Society and Wikipedia course at the Politecnico di Milano, in July 2023. The article is well written, well organized, well documented, and very clearly developed. From both a scientific and an editorial point of view, it is quite an exemplary case for a Wikipedia entry.

--Aandurro (talk) 12:29, 18 July 2023 (UTC)