Talk:Hyspaosines/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Amitchell125 (talk · contribs) 10:44, 3 October 2020 (UTC)

Hi, I'll review this one.

Lead section / infobox

 * Unlink Iran.
 * I’m unclear why the first sentence has a citation—is that he was an Iranian prince controversial at all?
 * Mostly by new accounts and IPs. --HistoryofIran (talk) 18:48, 6 October 2020 (UTC)
 * I would take out the citation here. Amitchell125 (talk) 21:02, 6 October 2020 (UTC)
 * Done, moved them to the background section. --HistoryofIran (talk) 23:48, 6 October 2020 (UTC)

Governorship

 * ...abrupt death… - can you be more specific about how he died?

Reign

 * No capitals in ‘’Astronomical Diaries’’.
 * ...abrupt death… - can you be more specific about how he died?
 * Who was Lucian?
 * Added that he was a 2th-century Roman historian. --HistoryofIran (talk) 18:48, 6 October 2020 (UTC)
 * The son is not named, it was most likely Apodakos. - Ref 6b (Shayegan) appears to be more definite about his son’s name than this.
 * Not sure I understand, thoughts? --HistoryofIran (talk) 23:34, 6 October 2020 (UTC)
 * It's now looking OK. Amitchell125 (talk) 06:10, 7 October 2020 (UTC)

On hold
I have put the article on hold for a week until 14 October. Regards, Amitchell125 (talk) 18:37, 6 October 2020 (UTC)

Passing
Great work, now passing. Amitchell125 (talk) 06:12, 7 October 2020 (UTC)