Talk:I'm Your Baby Tonight (song)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 09:05, 30 December 2022 (UTC)

I will get on with this right away --K. Peake 09:05, 30 December 2022 (UTC)

Infobox and lead
'''I think it is, it gives background information as to why Houston decided to focus on the black public and record the track ✅
 * Only list new jack swing in the infobox since the other two are influences
 * Add the release year of her album of the same name
 * "and most European countries it was" → "and most European countries, it was"
 * The Billboard 200 part is not relevant enough for the lead, also are you sure that the "not black enough" part is either?
 * "she chose to work with" → "Houston chose to work with"
 * "produced boyfriend Bobby Brown's 1989 album" → "produced her boyfriend Bobby Brown's 1989 album,"
 * Shouldn't the song being one of the last recorded be mentioned?
 * "it was generally well-received by most critics," → "the song was generally well-received by music critics,"
 * Should "street-oriented" really be in quotes when only one reviewer actually wrote that?
 * The #1990s part is not needed
 * "it is now considered one" → "it has been considered one"
 * "It was also" → "The song was also"
 * "successful; in the United States, it become Houston's eight number one on the" → "successful, becoming Houston's eighth number one on the US"
 * The Switzerland position is not written out anywhere in the body
 * Lowercase the Supremes per MOS:THEMUSIC
 * "as tribute to Houston" → "in tribute to Houston" however, this para is too short so try to split the previous one at a different point

Background

 * Img looks good!
 * Mention that it is her self-titled second studio album
 * I believe how I wrote it works fine, since Whitney Houston actually has two self-titled albums: 1985's Whitney Houston and 1987's Whitney, and I don't want to mention the word "Whitney" twice.

✅
 * "to debut atop the Billboard 200." → "to debut atop the US Billboard 200."
 * "chastised Houston for "playing it safe"," → "chastised how Houston "plays everything safe"," per the source
 * Remove capitalization for adult contemporary music
 * "but I wasn't"." → if this is a full sentence, then the punctuation should be inside the quote
 * "attitude" inspired Houston." → "attitude" inspired the singer."
 * Remove the comma after third studio album

Composition and release
✅
 * Audio sample looks good!
 * Remove pipe on keyboards
 * "Musically, it has been described" → "Musically, "I'm Your Baby Tonight" has been described"
 * Black church should not be capitalized unless the source does that, also why is dance piped to dance pop not dance music?
 * "unlike her past songs, it doesn't" → "unlike her past songs, the track fails to"
 * Wikilink tempo
 * Wikilink chord progression
 * [6] should solely be at the end of the sentence
 * "Breihan held that it's the word" → "Breihan held that it is the word"

Critical reception
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 * "received generally positive reviews" → "was met with generally positive reviews"
 * "who called it a "sure hit" and" → "who called the song a "sure hit", and"
 * "Tom Breihan wrote that, despite its" → "Breihan wrote that, despite the"
 * "more and more fun"." → "more and more fun."" per MOS:QUOTE on full sentences
 * "is what's required"." → "is what's required."" per above
 * "considered it Houston's" → "considered "I'm Your Baby Tonight" Houston's"
 * A poll conducted of Rolling Stone readers found the song to be Houston's eighth best, so alter accordingly
 * "saying it was a" → "saying the song is a"
 * "For BET, it is" → "For BET, the song is"

Commercial performance
✅
 * Img looks good!
 * "for shipment of 500,000 copies;" → "for shipments of 500,000 copies in the US;"
 * "Houston's eight number one" → "Houston's eighth number one"
 * Is "up at the time" really a good way of wording it?
 * "In Australia, it entered the" → "In Australia, the song entered the"
 * Why is the Switzerland position not mentioned here when it is in the lead?

Music video, live performances and covers
✅
 * Img looks good!
 * Shouldn't the choreography sentence read that Adam Shankman was in charge of choreography?
 * Lowercase the Supremes per MOS:THEMUSIC
 * "candy-colored dresses" and focused" → "candy-colored dresses", and focused"
 * "Christina Aguilera and" → "Christina Aguilera, and"
 * "On early 1991," → "In early 1991,"
 * Mention the year of the Welcome Home special
 * "as tribute to Houston." → "as a tribute to Houston."

Track listings and formats

 * Good

Credits and personnel

 * Good

Weekly charts

 * Good

Year-end charts
✅
 * Each table needs a separate caption

All-time charts
✅
 * See MOS:TABLECAPTION

Certifications and sales
✅
 * Retitle to Certifications

Final comments and verdict

 * until all of the issues are fixed; that went rather quickly! --K. Peake 12:27, 30 December 2022 (UTC)
 * I have fixed most of the issues addressed; will be back later to finish the rest. --Christian (talk) 14:38, 30 December 2022 (UTC)
 * I have addressed (almost) all the points addressed, I just have some questions I hope you can clear up for me :) --Christian (talk) 23:02, 30 December 2022 (UTC)
 * The only things I have left to comment are that you could identify the album as her second self-titled album, I meant to add the via parameter to those refs with Google Books and ref 87 needs date formatting fixed. --K. Peake 10:44, 31 December 2022 (UTC)
 * Ref 87 is an embedded template for the certifications, is there a way to change it? My doubt regarding the google books via parameter is, do they go on the Bibliography section? Can you provide an example? --Christian (talk) 16:36, 31 December 2022 (UTC)
 * The problem is with the access date, which obviously can be fixed and the bibliography section gives no links to Google Books, so no. --K. Peake 10:21, 1 January 2023 (UTC)
 * Hello, happy new year :D ! I'm still not sure on the google books/via you're mentioning, could you provide an example? I also haven't figured out a way to modifiy an existing template (regarding the certification) :/ --Christian (talk) 00:57, 3 January 2023 (UTC)
 * I mean sources like 7 that are on Google Books; add this parameter to them and all you need to do is change the access-date, which can be done for a template since someone obviously set that part in the first place. --K. Peake 09:06, 3 January 2023 (UTC)
 * hello! I have modify the certification template; let me know if that is OK--Christian (talk) 23:42, 6 January 2023 (UTC)
 * ✅ now, good job on finally fixing those issues after we went back and forth on them! --K. Peake 11:23, 7 January 2023 (UTC)