Talk:I'm a Sinner/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Calvin999 (talk · contribs) 10:55, 18 August 2013 (UTC)


 * General
 * Some problematic links


 * Writing and recording
 * with production done → with production handled
 * Link mixed and engineered
 * Link Pro Tools
 * with additional editing was done → with... was ?


 * Composition
 * The mTV source doesn't cite pop or techno for this song. Where did you get those from?
 * Why is Sixties capitalised? Perhaps try linking to sixties music article?
 * Put "Ray of Light" before "Amazing", because at the moment its 2000 and 1998. 1998 and 2000 would be better


 * Critical response
 * Link music critics
 * Jim Farber for New York Daily News had the same opinion. → This worries me. Can't you paraphrase the quote to amalgamate both their opinions and reword to say: Jim Farber for New York Daily News and Jon Pareles from The New York Times..... ?


 * Credits and personnel
 * Production doesn't appear on the line under Songwriting


 * Charts
 * South Korea, annoyingly, is a dead link now. I know the song did chart, but it's not able to be sourced now. I guess it should be removed.


 * Status
 * On hold. —  ₳  aron  11:08, 18 August 2013 (UTC)


 * ✅ all.  Jorn  talk 17:42, 18 August 2013 (UTC)
 * Passing. —  ₳  aron  18:16, 18 August 2013 (UTC)