Talk:I've Got a Feeling (Ivy song)/GA1

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Reviewer: MarioSoulTruthFan (talk · contribs) 01:26, 30 December 2016 (UTC)

I'll be reviewing your article soon.

Infobox

 * Flawless.

Lead

 * Needs to be expanded.


 * was released as the record's second single on October 7, 1997 by Atlantic Records. → where?


 * The single → The track


 * Add a part of the composition "vocals, horn section".


 * Short sentence regarding the CD singles.

Background and composition

 * This section is too big when comparing to the others, shall we split it?


 * Perhaps split in Background and release in one section, while the other is Production and composition.


 * Split the first and second section in two paragraphs, after the previous point is addressed.


 * I've Got a Feeling" was taken from Ivy's second studio album, Apartment Life, released in 1997 by Atlantic Records. → I've Got a Feeling" was taken from Ivy's second studio album, Apartment Life, released on October 6, 1997 by Atlantic Records as its second single. It was released on October 7, 1997. + sources for all of this.


 * Atlantic also → Atlantic Records also


 * "I've Got a Feeling" was written by Dominique Durand, Adam Schlesinger and Andy Chase, with Lloyd Cole and Peter Nashel handling additional production → add mixing personnel, mastering and so on...


 * It is a pop song.[13] Supported by a horn → It is a pop song,[13] supported by a horn


 * 1960s-style harmonies, → 1960s-style harmonies.

Critical reception

 * Flick from Billboard' → Flick of Billboard magazine.


 * radio is given a chance → radio if given a chance.


 * "The rest is more lighthearted yet still crafted, cleanly produced, stylized old-pop with warmth, such as the cooing" → AllMusic, has a lot more describing the song


 * "piled on the layers of guitars, creating beautiful, shimmering" → Pop Dose


 * "catchy pop" → MTV

Music video

 * "A music video for "I've Got a Feeling" was released sometime in 1997." → Source?


 * "while other shots of the members outside of the booth are shown." → while shots of the Ivy members, who are outside of the booth, are displayed.


 * "play guitars" → play two guitars


 * "Durand nods her head" → As I see it in the video, she doesn't nod as much as she lowers her head. At least I don't see it as a nod.
 * ✅ – Much better wording! :) Carbrera (talk) 00:56, 7 January 2017 (UTC).

Track listing and formats

 * Use so there is space on both sides.

Personnel

 * Same as previous.


 * Two columns is more than enough.


 * Link mixing and mastering.

Release history

 * Personally I wouldn't use the links in the same column as the countries but its fine.
 * ✅ – Great. Carbrera (talk) 00:56, 7 January 2017 (UTC)


 * Add the date to the amazon reference.

Overall GA review

 * Wait to address any issues until I finish this review.
 * You can now address the issues. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 19:33, 2 January 2017 (UTC)
 * are up for this? MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 13:58, 6 January 2017 (UTC)
 * I have finished everything, with the exception of archiving the sources. Thank you very much for your review! Carbrera (talk) 01:07, 7 January 2017 (UTC).