Talk:I've Just Begun (Having My Fun)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Adabow (talk · contribs) 05:16, 30 November 2010 (UTC)

Lead

 * "some naming it one of the best songs in the compilation while others dismissed its lyrical content" - comma after 'compilation' ✅

Background

 * "The song was written by Spears, Michelle Bell, Christian Karlsson, Pontus Winnberg, Henrik Jonback and produced by Bloodshy & Avant..." → The song was written by Spears, Michelle Bell, Christian Karlsson, Pontus Winnberg and Henrik Jonback, and was produced by Bloodshy & Avant... ✅
 * Would the free release not make it a promo single? ✅
 * Ref for release date? ✅

Composition

 * "... is an electro-funk song, that according to the sheetmusic published at musicnotes.com..." → ...is an electro-funk song, and according to the sheet music published at musicnotes.com... ✅
 * Be consistent - musicnotes.com in the prose, MusicNotes.com in reference ✅
 * Who has compared it to "Hella Good"? - name critics ✅
 * You don't need to link 'settling down'. 'Make believe' is marginal ✅

Critical reception

 * In the Zone should be in italics ✅

Credits and personnel

 * Source? ✅

Adressed all the concerns. Xwomanizerx (talk) 05:42, 30 November 2010 (UTC)
 * Nice work :) Adabow (talk · contribs) 05:46, 30 November 2010 (UTC)