Talk:IPhone 6/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Numbermaniac (talk · contribs) 03:03, 8 January 2016 (UTC)

Article looks pretty good to start. --  numbermaniac  ( talk ) 03:03, 8 January 2016 (UTC)


 * The "clarification needed" tag needs to be addressed in the first section (after the lead).
 * Is it necessary to repeat the paragraph about the discontinuation of the 128 GB model?
 * It should be explained that PPI means Pixels per inch. A link to the article should suffice. SSTFlyer has done two of these, I did the final one since it was quick.

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria 
 * 1) Is it reasonably well written?
 * A. Prose is "clear and concise", without spelling and grammar errors:
 * The points I stated above need to be addressed.
 * B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:
 * 1) Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
 * A. Has an appropriate reference section:
 * B. Cites reliable sources, where necessary:
 * C. No original research:
 * D. No copyright violations nor plagiarism:
 * 1) Is it broad in its coverage?
 * A. Major aspects:
 * B. Focused (see summary style):
 * 1) Is it neutral?
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content:
 * B. Images are provided if possible and are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * The review is on hold until the notes above this list are fixed.
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content:
 * B. Images are provided if possible and are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * The review is on hold until the notes above this list are fixed.
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * The review is on hold until the notes above this list are fixed.

Passed. --  numbermaniac  ( talk ) 06:58, 10 January 2016 (UTC)