Talk:I Am God/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Gen. Quon (talk · contribs) 03:36, 17 August 2015 (UTC)

Sorry about the review time!
 * Maybe put ratings info in the lead?
 * done


 * Possibly expand why the episode got mixed reviews?
 * done


 * "Veronica has a dream of the dead bus crash students before she visits the guidance counselor" When did this happen? In a previous episode? If so, I'd recommend putting a "Background" subheading before the plot summary
 * Wait, which part? The dream takes place within the episode--the bus crash takes place in the season two premiere.
 * The bus crash. It happens out of the blue in the plot summary.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   01:36, 7 September 2015 (UTC)


 * "In science class, Logan gets paired with Wallace and Dick gets paired with Angie Dahl (Kayla Ewell)." That comes out of nowhere
 * would cut out all the science stuff from the three paragraphs and restructure them into their own new one. As its stands, the plot summary is really choppy
 * done Also, copyedited the section. I think it's a lot less choppy than The Rapes of Graff one, especially because this one is difficult to summarize. Johanna (formerly BenLinus1214)talk to me!see my work 23:30, 6 September 2015 (UTC)


 * Is BuzzFeed a good source for reviews?
 * I think it's fine seeing as it's a widely used source from known and vetted authors, especially because this is a list rather than a review, which is what BuzzFeed is known for.
 * Fair enough.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   01:36, 7 September 2015 (UTC)


 * Just a personal preference (that you totally don't have to do, but I think it makes the page easier to read): I'd seperate all of the reviews and then group them based on what they're saying. So TV.com and AV Club could go together, and Television Without a Pity and Alan Sepinwall could go together, etc.
 * done Flipped stuff around a bit--let me know how that looks. Johanna (formerly BenLinus1214)talk to me!see my work 23:30, 6 September 2015 (UTC)


 * "The Rapes of Graff" has two columns for its references, but this one only has one. Just a minor note
 * done

Just a few things.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   15:42, 6 September 2015 (UTC) I fixed everything, I believe. Let me know if there's anything else I can do. Johanna (formerly BenLinus1214)talk to me!see my work 23:30, 6 September 2015 (UTC)
 * If you can expand upon/clarify the bus crash bit, then this'll pass!-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   01:37, 7 September 2015 (UTC)
 * I don't think a background bit is necessary--I added a link to "Normal Is the Watchword", the season two premiere in which the crash occurred. Johanna  (formerly BenLinus1214)talk to me!see my work 01:07, 11 September 2015 (UTC)
 * Good enough for me! Pass.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   02:11, 11 September 2015 (UTC)