Talk:I Am Your Leader/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Calvin999 (talk · contribs) 23:09, 26 June 2013 (UTC)

✅ ✅ Electro hop is a term for "electronic hip-hop", so I just linked electronic and hip-hop ✅
 * Info box
 * If it wasn't a single then why does it have a release date?
 * Hip hop music doesn't reference electro hop at all, better of unlinking it here and elsewhere in the article.
 * Genres should also be alphabetical

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 * Lead
 * is a song by → is a song recorded by
 * taken from her → for her
 * promoted the song briefly → briefly performed a part of the song

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 * Background
 * that Minaj was aiming for a first quarter release in 2012. → that minaj was aiming to release her second album within the first quarter of 2012.

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 * Composition
 * Keep it all as one paragraph, no need for a two sentence para.
 * In his review of the song, Andrew Unterberger of Popdust → Unterberger

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 * Critical reception
 * complimenting Minaj → for doing what?
 * was somewhat overshadowed → was overshadowed
 * Allmusic shouldn't be in italics
 * Neither Slant Magazine

✅ On hold. I'm going on holiday soon so if you can get this done ASAP. — AARON  &bull; TALK   16:52, 27 June 2013 (UTC)
 * Music video
 * Rename to Promotion and put the one sentence about Live performance at the end of the Music video paragraph, thus removing the Live performance section.
 * Status
 * GA —  AARON  &bull; TALK   11:21, 28 June 2013 (UTC)