Talk:I Am the Club Rocker/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: HĐ (talk · contribs) 04:54, 19 May 2016 (UTC)

Sorry for the delay. Full review coming soon. — Simon (talk) 04:51, 25 May 2016 (UTC)


 * Lead
 * "additional producing" → production
 * "major success" → "major" sounds biased
 * "it reached number eight in its second charting week on the Mexican Albums Chart, after debuting at number 53 in September 2011" → be consistent (see WP:ORDINALS)
 * "number 23... number 45..." → be consistent with ordinal numbers (see above)
 * "with it bringing total sales of nearly 8,000 shipments" → with its total shipments of nearly 8,000 units
 * "The song as well impacted other European countries" → "impacted" sounds bizarre
 * "number one, number three and number 26" → be consistent with ordinal numbers and serial comma
 * "were majorly successful worldwide" → "majorly" sounds biased
 * "I Am the Club Rocker Tour (2011-2012) and toured Europe and the Unites States" → the tour name should not be italicised + "United States" + I Am... Tour, which visited Europe and the United States
 * and made thousands of people sing along with her most of her songs → to me this is overfluous

More to come. — Simon (talk) 02:23, 1 June 2016 (UTC)
 * Any chance you'll get to this soon? Cartoon network freak (talk) 17:58, 5 June 2016 (UTC)
 * Here you go.


 * Background
 * "She's wearing a summer suit and sporting long boots and a French-like bun" → a summer suit, sporting long boots and a French-like bun. Also, what is "bun" in this case?
 * "The album remains an europop, dance-pop, techno and house record" → remains? Are these Inna's signature styles? If so, please clarify.
 * "and some other vocal effects" → vague, can be omitted


 * Reception
 * number 45, number eight... → be consistent (see WP:ORDINALS)
 * "Furthermore, he as well" → "Furthermore, he..."
 * "Furthermore, he criticized the use of Auto Tune" → repetition of "Furthermore", try using some other phrases


 * Promotion
 * Release dates for singles should be added
 * This section only include one subsection "Singles", so I think you can omit the sub-section
 * Again, be consistent with numbers (chart positions)
 * "In just a few hours after the clip's premiere, it amassed nearly 6,000 likes" → this sounds, uhm, unencyclopedic
 * Other than that, great job!


 * for seven days. Simon (talk) 08:32, 16 June 2016 (UTC)
 * Done everything! "bun" has to man an accesoire she wears, and I didn't include the dates for the singles, as they're already provided in the infobox + the singles have each an own article, where this can be further seen. Best, Cartoon network freak (talk) 11:58, 16 June 2016 (UTC)