Talk:I Can't Stop Drinking About You/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Sebbirrrr (talk · contribs) 13:56, 30 October 2022 (UTC)

Review coming soon.

Infobox and lead

 * The article should use mdy dates as Rexha is American
 * ❌ The refs don't use mdy dates.


 * The cover needs alt text
 * The genre in the infobox should be electropop (see below)
 * I would remove the "first cover" as it comes from an unreliable source (WP:ALBUMAVOID) and there's no explanation as to why it is the "first cover"
 * "from her debut extended play" → "from her debut extended play,"
 * "as the lead single" → remove, it's not cited anywhere
 * "It is" → " "I Can't Stop Drinking About You" is"
 * "melancholia-inspired" → this sounds weird so I'd remove it entirely
 * The genre is electropop (see below)
 * "widespread acclaim" → I'd change to just "positive reviews" as there are not that many sources used to call it acclaim
 * "It failed to enter the US Billboard Hot 100" → remove per WP:CHARTTRAJ
 * "Drawing influence" → who drew influence?
 * I would recommend saying something along the lines of "A music video was released...It draws influence from" to flow better.


 * I would not call the video accompanying as it was not released on the same date as the song

Background and composition

 * Some background on her career would help as this is her debut single
 * Done. Iaof2017 (talk) 16:35, 2 November 2022 (UTC)
 * AllMusic should be tagged as a publisher on the ref and it has an author too


 * "as the lead single from Rexha's debut extended play I Don't Wanna Grow Up (2015)" → not given by the source
 * Reference added. Iaof2017 (talk) 12:16, 2 November 2022 (UTC)


 * "melancholia-inspired" → see above
 * The pop genre is sourced to ref 8, which is a press release. This falls under WP:PRIMARY and it'd be inappropriate to include what the record label defined the song as so remove it and only keep the electro-pop genre which is sourced by Vibe
 * I'm not sure what it should cite for "It begins as an ballad and turns into a pop rock song.", so please remove what is supposed to cite as well/
 * "EDM elements" and "electronic production" are sourced by ref 8 too so remove them as well

Reception

 * "widespread acclaim" → see above
 * Bradley Stern and Brad Stern are the same person, please condense his review into one
 * Idolator should be italicized and it should be just MTV instead of MTV Buzzworthy.


 * See under references for Bustle and Club Corbeille
 * "failed to enter the US Billboard Hot 100" → see above

Music video

 * See above for "accompanying"
 * "American creative director" → WP:TMI
 * "a bit of anger, frustration, sadness, the craziness" should be in quotes as this comes directly from Rexha
 * "vacant-appearing" → "vacant" suffices
 * "dark-lit" → "dark" suffices
 * "clad" → "dressed"
 * "and face-to-face with a man" → "facing a man"
 * "impulses."[18][16]" → refs should be in increasing order

Track listing

 * Fine

Charts

 * Fine

Release history

 * Link digital download to Music download and streaming to Streaming media
 * It's linked in the first instance, isn't that enough? Iaof2017 (talk) 12:12, 2 November 2022 (UTC)
 * This is in a separate table so it should be linked as well.


 * Format → Format(s)
 * The remixes EP should be included here as well

Outcome

 * for 7 days. A few issues but the article isn't that far from becoming a GA. Sebbirrrr (talk) 18:09, 30 October 2022 (UTC)
 * Hey, thanks for the review. I've addressed your concerns, with few comments above. Iaof2017 (talk) 17:08, 2 November 2022 (UTC)
 * Thanks for addressing them. I've left a few more regarding certain ones but great work overall! Sebbirrrr (talk) 18:26, 3 November 2022 (UTC)
 * Hi, done. All dates use mdy format. Iaof2017 (talk) 19:40, 5 November 2022 (UTC)
 * I added the author for the AllMusic source but aside from that everything else has been addressed! now. Sebbirrrr (talk) 22:23, 5 November 2022 (UTC)