Talk:I Did It, Mama!/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: MarioSoulTruthFan (talk · contribs) 17:58, 28 May 2016 (UTC)

Hello, I'm User:MarioSoulTruthFan and I'll be reviewing this article. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 17:58, 28 May 2016 (UTC)

Lead

 * "I Did It, Mama!" is a song recorded by Romanian recording artist → recorded, recording...replace "recording artist" with singer-songwriter.
 * for her eponymous second studio album, Alesta (2016). → which one was the first?
 * I'm not getting this at all. Isn't it her fourth album overall? Which one was the first eponymous album?


 * David Ciente, while the writing → David Ciente. The writing (sentence is too long, any other suggestion is acceptance after I see it.)
 * the recording → the record.
 * What did the reviewers said regarding this song? Mixed opinion, positive, criticism?
 * Should include the chart peak.


 * "I Did It, Mama!" was met with negative to positive reviews, with music critics calling it catchy "an earworm" and "great", and others naming it "boring" and not radio-friendly. →...it was met with mixed reviews? Link music critics. Rephrase the rest of the sentence. Did any critic called it catchy or are those your words?

Composition and lyrical interpretation
✅
 * confessed about the song that → doesn't flow properly
 * She as well named → She has, as well, named

Critical response

 * Flawless.

Music video and promotion

 * The first paragraph should come as the third and the last, since the name of the section is "Music video and promotion".
 * where it has since amassed over 11 million views → remove this, is not a milestone.
 * "Stan particularly confessed about it that" → Stan particularly confessed that
 * "recommending its watching" → I don't like how it sounds, rephrase.
 * Romanian tabloids Cancan and Click! → tabloids are not a reliable source, can't you find others?
 * Well, after I made a research, I now know these aren't tabloids; they're newspapers. And no, I can't find other sites talking about this.

Just replace the word "tabloids" for newspapers and wiki link it. ✅
 * commending that → commending

Credits and personnel

 * "Bogdan Daragiu – director" of what?
 * link "director of photography"

✅

Track listing
✅
 * Archive our found the archives to those links. Itunes is great but they tend to "die" every now and then.

Charts
✅
 * col-begin; col-2 → What are these templates doing there?
 * Secondly, why do I have an audio file instead of a website with the charts positions? It should be compiled with the podcast templates parameters. See: Template:Cite podcast.

Release and radio history

 * Radio history it's part of the promotion so no need for that.
 * Needs prose regarding everything. Maybe a new section called "release and promotion"?
 * I think this is not needed, as the single was released on almost the same dates worldwide. If I would create this section, then it would contain maybe max. 2-3 sentences, which would be too short.

Then just add that little prose on top of of this section like this Treasure (Bruno Mars song). ✅
 * Radio airplay table needs to have the same size as the others.
 * Once again, archive the links.

Overall GA review
Some fixes that can be easily achieved in no time. Good luck, I will put it on hold for a week. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 18:32, 28 May 2016 (UTC)
 * Solved all your problems with some abbrevations. Best, Cartoon network freak (talk) 20:24, 28 May 2016 (UTC)
 * Done your comment; the lyrics are from DirectLyrics, as Metro Lyrics actually don't have the song's lyrics. Cartoon network freak (talk) 20:34, 28 May 2016 (UTC)
 * Cartoon network freak (talk) 20:39, 28 May 2016 (UTC)
 * Gladly passing. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 21:11, 28 May 2016 (UTC)