Talk:I Don't Search I Find/GA1

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Reviewer: Kyle Peake (talk · contribs) 09:25, 30 June 2020 (UTC)

Will get started on this sometime today or tomorrow --Kyle Peake (talk) 09:25, 30 June 2020 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

 * Cover art needs alt text
 * Use bullet points instead of hlist in the infobox
 * ❌ --Kyle Peake (talk) 07:32, 1 July 2020 (UTC)


 * Recording date is unsourced
 * "is a song recorded by American singer" → "is a song by American singer"
 * "for her fourteenth studio album," → "from her fourteenth studio album,"
 * "written and produced by Madonna and Mirwais Ahmadzaï" → "written and produced by Madonna, alongside Mirwais"
 * The Italy release sentence should be the following sentence instead
 * "as the fourth official single from Madame X" → "as the fourth single from the album" with the appropriate target
 * ❌ --Kyle Peake (talk) 07:32, 1 July 2020 (UTC)


 * Mention that the release was to contemporary hit radio with the appropriate wikilink
 * Also, fix the label since the source states it was through Universal
 * The EPs release sentence should come directly after this in the new order
 * "several remixes were released" → "several remixes had been released"
 * "It is an" → "The track is an"
 * "influenced track that takes inspiration" → "influenced song that takes inspiration"
 * ❌ Change to "It is an..." instead since you just stated "the song" shortly before, but change "the song" to "the track" for consistency --Kyle Peake (talk) 07:32, 1 July 2020 (UTC)


 * Target house to House music
 * ❌ I meant keep the prose the same but change the target --Kyle Peake (talk) 07:32, 1 July 2020 (UTC)

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 * "previous works such as" → "previous works, including"
 * "received positive feedback from" → "received generally positive reviews from" since not all were positive
 * "and deemed it one of the best tracks from the album" → "and deemed the track one of the best songs from Madame X"
 * "also gave Madonna her record-breaking" → "gave Madonna her record-breaking"
 * "on Billboard's Dance Club Songs chart" → "on the US Billboard Dance Club Songs chart"
 * Target UK Single Sales to UK music charts and change to UK Singles Sales
 * "it reached number 66" → "the track reached number 66"
 * "The song was performed on the singer's" → "It was performed on Madonna's"

Background and composition

 * First para looks good
 * "was written and produced by Madonna and Mirwais" → "was written by Madonna and Mirwais, who also handled production"
 * "It takes its title after a quote by" → "The track takes its title after a quote by"
 * "and a "rumbling" bass line;" → "and "rumbling" bassline;" with the wikilink
 * ❌ a is not needed before "rumbling" in this context --Kyle Peake (talk) 07:32, 1 July 2020 (UTC)


 * "it draws influence from Madonna's previous works such as" → "the track draws influence from Madonna's previous works, such as"
 * ❌ where is the comma? --Kyle Peake (talk) 07:32, 1 July 2020 (UTC)


 * "tone, the phrase" → "tone, she repeats the phrase"
 * "Also present is a" → "Also included is a"
 * "sample taken from" → "sample, taken from" with the target
 * ❌ where is the target fix? --Kyle Peake (talk) 07:32, 1 July 2020 (UTC)

✅
 * "inside your soul" Madonna was" → "inside your soul", Madonna was"

Release and critical reception

 * "On December 2019, an" → "On December 6, 2019, an"
 * "featuring three remixes created by" → "featuring three remixes of the song created by"
 * "was distributed to digital retailers" → "was released for digital download and streaming through Interscope Records"
 * "An additional EP − featuring remixes" → "An additional EP that includes remixes"
 * "DJ Kue and Offer Nissim − was" → "DJ Kue, and Offer Nissim was"
 * "on May 2, 2020" → "on May 2, 2020 by the aforementioned label"
 * "In Italy, "I Don't Search I Find" was released" → "In Italy, Universal Music Group released "I Don't Search I Find""
 * "the fourth official single from" → "the fourth single from" with the target
 * ❌ --Kyle Peake (talk) 07:32, 1 July 2020 (UTC)


 * "Upon release, the single received positive from" → "The song was met with generally positive reviews from"
 * "and compared it to" → "and compared the song to"
 * "isn’t a song so much as a mood. It’s" → "isn't a song so much as a mood. It's"
 * "for a quick bump or fuck"." → "for a quick bump or fuck."" since punctuation should be inside quotes for full sentences
 * "from NME, also compared it" → "from NME also compared the song"
 * "Jeremy Halliger, from" → "Jeremy Halliger, writing for"
 * "said it was" → "said the song was"
 * "’90s disco bliss, the album’s" → "'90s disco bliss, the album's"
 * "from the BBC, felt it" → "from the BBC felt it"
 * "and compared it to" → "and compared the song to"
 * "opined that, "once it gets going" → "opined that "once it gets going"
 * "'I Don’t Search I Find' is a class of its own. It’s like" → "'I Don't Search I Find' is a class of its own" and described it as "like"
 * "deemed the second best song on the album;" → "deemed the song the second best track on Madame X:"
 * "it’d be this" → "it'd be this"
 * "On her review of" → "In her review of"
 * "from The Independent, described" → "from The Independent described"
 * "between Nina Simone’s" → "between Nina Simone's"
 * Are you sure there aren't any targets for Bond in the context?
 * Do you suggest I wikilink it to James Bond music?--Christian (talk) 15:46, 30 June 2020 (UTC)
 * Yeah, that sounds right. --Kyle Peake (talk) 07:32, 1 July 2020 (UTC)


 * "of the fiercest ‘90s dance" → "of the fiercest '90s dance" with the target
 * "since, well, the ‘90s?"." → "since" the 1990s decade."
 * "from The Irish Times, stated that" → "from The Irish Times stated of Madonna's performance that"
 * "'I Don’t Search I Find', complete" → "'I Don't Search I Find', complete"
 * Target mid-tempo to Tempo
 * "'I Don’t Search I Find'", comparing it" → "'I Don't Search I Find'", comparing the track"
 * "the eight best song of 2019" → "the eighth best song of 2019"
 * ❌ --Kyle Peake (talk) 07:32, 1 July 2020 (UTC)

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 * "even though it’s a clear" → "even though it's a clear"
 * "it’s the closest thing" → "it's the closest thing"

Commercial reception and live performance

 * Mention the debut position; add a source if needed
 * "reached the first position" → "reached the summit"
 * "number-one songs in a single" → "number one songs on a single"
 * ❌ --Kyle Peake (talk) 07:32, 1 July 2020 (UTC)

✅
 * "The song also peaked at number 30 on the Dance/Electronic Songs chart on the same week it topped the Dance Club Songs chart." → "That same week, the song peaked at number 30 on the Dance/Electronic Songs chart."
 * "entered the singles sales chart" → "entered the Singles Sales chart" with the target
 * "the fifth position of the" → "the fifth position on the"
 * [28][29] should both be solely at the end of the sentence
 * "was included on Madonna's" → "was featured on Madonna's"
 * "and featured the singer" → "and featured the singer performing"
 * "expressed that "[Madonna] embodied" → "expressed that Madonna "embodied"
 * Wikilink music video to itself

Track listing
✅
 * Retitle to Track listings
 * Target on Honey Dijon should only be under the actual track listing and not in the title

Credits and personnel
✅
 * Wikilink Madonna to herself
 * Use so there is the right space between credits and personnel
 * Target vocals to Singing

Charts

 * Good

Release history
✅
 * Target Digital download to Music download on the first mention
 * Ditto for streaming to Streaming media
 * The Italy release was to Universal; fix this

Final comments and verdict

 * but noticed that on this occasion of me reviewing one of your articles, a lot of the issues from last time are no longer present; well picked up! --Kyle Peake (talk) 14:27, 30 June 2020 (UTC)
 * Let me know if I missed anything--Christian (talk) 19:22, 30 June 2020 (UTC)
 * I will have a look through now. --Kyle Peake (talk) 07:32, 1 July 2020 (UTC)
 * I have finally fixed those issues you mentioned --Christian (talk) 13:24, 1 July 2020 (UTC)
 * ✅, that was nice and quick! --Kyle Peake (talk) 13:47, 1 July 2020 (UTC)